高考英语作文 全国卷I：满分范文一rTH新思路教育 Dear Peter, rTH新思路教育
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I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. rTH新思路教育
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Since Im quite interested in English, I would like to make an English pen friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me? My ideal pen friend should be of my age, and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate. rTH新思路教育
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In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of traveling and football. If possible, I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you. rTH新思路教育
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Best regards, rTH新思路教育
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本文属于比较“平”的文章，即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词语，但是使用了一些短语和结构，能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy，比较好。If possible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。 rTH新思路教育
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好词：1. candidate n.候选人2.share with 与…分享 rTH新思路教育
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好句：In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看来，像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。 rTH新思路教育
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好处：复杂句的组合很好。rTH新思路教育
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